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Loki x Reader TRR Chapter Two
Child! Loki x Child! Reader |Meant|
OK, #Loki fans. It's finally here. I'm sorry about the gap in uploading - this is a huge chapter with lots of things going on and it was hard to get it right. I really hope you like it - PLEASE COMMENT!!! Thank you for continuing to read - it means a lot; you can stick a comment below if you like. Did ya like it? Did ya not? Whichever way, why? Is it too long? Would you prefer smaller chunks? Or was it OK? TELL ME!!!!!! Time for some cute Loki gifs:
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Loki really moves things on to create the perfect company of soldiers. Elisabet is not coping at home. Aida is working on a new design. And how about our Erika? Well, read on........
This is the seventeenth part of the sequel to To Tame A God
Previous Chapter: States Of A God's Heart Ch16: Secrets And Lies
Next Chapter: straining my brain but it is now here:States Of A God's Heart Ch18: Those We Have Lost
And I'm just going to have a little rant, coz I do work quite hard on my stories. I can take measured and helpful critique, but to be called crap without any in depth justification made my piss boil recently :
I have been informed by a fanfic reader (on AO3) that my continual [I actually write plenty of stuff without them] reliance on dreadfully written lemons to disguise my poor writing is an attempt to gain popularity. Since it came from someone whose Tumblr account is a thinly disguised pornographic blog, I'm not too worried. It must be the big words I use and a lack of explicit pictures that turned her off........
Also, I am grateful if only ONE person reads my stuff. I do not publish to be popular or famous - I publish because I need an outlet for my head noodles!
I know it's had a couple of limes already, but this is the first instance of a lemon in this particular story, which got to about SIXTY THOUSAND WORDS before it got its first proper sex scene. (Oh!! Did I just say the "s" word? ) That's more than my dissertation for my Bachelor degree!! If I wanted to be popular, I would not put as much effort in. I know what sells - I see enough of it on here and other sites and I'm afraid I simply do not usually write that way.
Sorry for harping on, but it IS my page and I do what I want :bademoticon:
And also I like the idea of Loki 'getting a message' from Erica by telepathy. It's almost like using the phone! Cool! ~^-^~