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*UPDATE SEPT 2015 - now censored due to a ban for graphic content. Google me and find my ARCHIVE if you want original full versions.*

OK, #Loki fans. It's finally here. I'm sorry about the gap in uploading - this is a huge chapter with lots of things going on and it was hard to get it right. I really hope you like it - PLEASE COMMENT!!! Thank you for continuing to read Heart  - it means a lot; you can stick a comment below if you like. Did ya like it? Did ya not? Whichever way, why? Is it too long? Would you prefer smaller chunks? Or was it OK? TELL ME!!!!!! Time for some cute Loki gifs:

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Loki really moves things on to create the perfect company of soldiers. Elisabet is not coping at home. Aida is working on a new design. And how about our Erika? Well, read on........

This is the seventeenth part of the sequel to To Tame A God
Previous Chapter: States Of A God's Heart Ch16: Secrets And Lies
Next Chapter: straining my brain Headache but it is now here:States Of A God's Heart Ch18: Those We Have Lost


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And I'm just going to have a little rant, coz I do work quite hard on my stories. I can take measured and helpful critique, but to be called crap without any in depth justification made my piss boil recently :angry :

I have been informed by a fanfic reader (on AO3) that my continual [I actually write plenty of stuff without them] reliance on dreadfully written lemons to disguise my poor writing is an attempt to gain popularity. Since it came from someone whose Tumblr account is a thinly disguised pornographic blog, I'm not too worried. It must be the big words I use and a lack of explicit pictures that turned her off........
Also, I am grateful if only ONE person reads my stuff. I do not publish to be popular or famous - I publish because I need an outlet for my head noodles!
I know it's had a couple of limes already, but this is the first instance of a lemon in this particular story, which got to about SIXTY THOUSAND WORDS before it got its first proper sex scene. (Oh!! Did I just say the "s" word? ;) (Wink) ) That's more than my dissertation for my Bachelor degree!! If I wanted to be popular, I would not put as much effort in. I know what sells - I see enough of it on here and other sites and I'm afraid I simply do not usually write that way.

Sorry for harping on, but it IS my page and I do what I want :bademoticon: 

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Oh my god, you've surprised me so much! On one hand it's so unlike for Erica to be such... bad girl, especially for her 'dreaming' state. I still remember what a responsible, calm nd even superior behavior she performed at her first meeting with Loki in a dream. It was so unusual to read of how Loki's being seduced, almost losing control over the situation! That's very peculiar to 'see' the trikster god that 'does what he wants' to be enforced for the sexual actions! :D Hehe, I never expected that that all could go so far. Seems that the dream-state Erica was at superior position now not at her emotional behavior but at the call of flash. That's something!
And also I like the idea of Loki 'getting a message' from Erica by telepathy. It's almost like using the phone! Cool! ~^-^~